A Dry Word from the Thirsty Gentleman by the Bar

/ Just Barry
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A Dry Word from the Thirsty Gentleman by the Bar

I don’t want to

burden you

with overflowing

echoes of my emptiness,

 

but if your efflorescence

yearns for my warmth,

I’ll fill you with

my want

until

 

we’re both spilled,

replenished,

wrung.

 

But if

your echoed thirst

is misread

 

please enjoy this free drink.

** *

Written for dVerse’s Quadrille #32, hosted by De Jackson, aka WhimsyGizmo. The wordplay of the day is echo.

When most of us think of the word echo, haunting, wistful imagery tends to come to mind. I wanted to try finding a silly counterbeat.

Go here to read other poets’ contributions to this prompt.

16 thoughts on “A Dry Word from the Thirsty Gentleman by the Bar”

    • Thanks. I was hoping to make the speaker’s tone waffle from urgent/immediate to nonchalant/unassuming… like a thirsty dude trying not to try so hard.

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