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Quantum Entanglement (The Lovers)
In a blink
all he thought he knew
subverted
With a wink
all she thought she outgrew
reawakened
On the brink
all their fates knocked askew
re-knotted
With a kink
all the cosmos curled a screw
unfastened
Interlinked
by indifferent ether Déjà vu
enraptured
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Written for dVerse Quadrille #68: Winkle, Winkle, Little Poem, hosted by De Jackson (Whimsy Gizmo).
I wrote this before coming up with a title for it. I got my title from here.
some connections are so strong and seem so explainable – love your line on the cosmos curled a screw like a velvet night typhoon
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Oooh… like a velvet night typhoon… I like that! Thank you for your kind words. 😊
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Love the rhymes and progression from wink to interlinked… that’s how love works.
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Spooky action at a distance, indeed. Thanks. 😊
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I love how you constructed this!
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Thanks. 😊
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Very welcome! 😊
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Love the constant rhyme and the build up to what love is.
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😊
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Love the sudden upheaval and realization of where our hearts and fates are to be!!!
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I absolutely love the rhyme, rhythm and form of this. Well done!
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I love the rhyme and rhythm of this and the wordplay. Love and the cosmos!
Thanks for the article link, too. That play sounds interesting. I like plays (and poetry) with a science connection.
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I like the power of the wink to reawaken what one has outgrown.
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Hi just Barry! I enjoyed reading your poem here, it was well written… and congratulations to you! A just man is very hard to find these days…
…rob from Image & Verse
My “wink”
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