
Image by Klaus Hausmann from Pixabay
Tao of Demon Feeding
Your demon needs you to yield to yin
Yoni expands, she ripens, giving
Yang overflows before you begin
Ingest to ingress and press to skin
She’ll guide your hand to feel her living
Your demon needs you to yield to yin
Yearning blurs taboo, blending blade-thin
Pierce her lines, brazen, unforgiving
Yang overflows before you begin
She drinks your light, making your head spin
Meld with her ache without misgiving
Your demon needs you to yield to yin
Sticky, warm, and sweet, she drips from chin
Melt mingling, streaming, beyond sieving
Yang overflows before you begin
Surrender to salvation within
Some little-deaths merit reliving
Your demon needs you to yield to yin
Yang overflows before you begin
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Written for dVerse Forms for all – the Villanelle, hosted by sarahsouthwest. Other poets contributed to this prompt here.
This is the sexiest villanelle I’ve seen so far. The repetition is like an incantation, and it all builds up to that final killer couplet. You’ve used the form so well.
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Oh this is so hot… and what a wonderful use of alliteration to enhance the rhythm
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I love the sensuality, the ripening and overflowing, the melting of yin and yang ~ I specially admire this line: Some little-deaths merit reliving
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Commiserations, and better luck next time! LOL
Brilliantly clever write.
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I’m imagining a man and a woman, curled like yin-yang, swirling, suspended in ecstasy. A sensual outpouring that makes the form glow.
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p.s. good music and video also!
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whistles ~
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Nice line: “Some little-deaths merit reliving”
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