
Photo by averie woodard on Unsplash
Incapable of Her Own Distress
She was beautiful
and needed to be seen as thus,
climbing higher,
her angelic features giving
a false appearance of
a fallen messenger clawing her
way back into paradise with
mud-caked fingers weaving
flowered trinkets,
an accumulation
of bruises
piled upon her well-worn
lust-slickened flesh, and
a wickedly zealous glare
affixed on something
beyond common sight,
not recalling how
she got so high
upon the precarious bough,
the wind spitting sleet into her face, she,
returning the favor, choking
on bile from her own spite
and other vulgarities
wailed in her song of
want and lunacy,
laughing mournfully
under pale lunar glow,
so when she fell
no one could tell
her fantastic mania
from her sunken plight.
She was beautiful
even then, at the end,
a siren swooned, felled
by her own song,
seeing in greater clarity
from the under-side of
the rain-drowned brook, buoyant
no more, unlike the flowers
scattered from her lifeless hands,
her peace-glazed eyes
silently affixed on heaven.
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Originally shared on Medium
Also shared on Poets United POETRY PANTRY #491.
Lovely to see you, Barry. I can see your protagonist, too, poised between her mania and despair. I have known people like her. They suffer much.
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Hi Barry! The photo puts me in mind of the painting of Ophelia by Millais. So sad her life. Suicide is horrible.
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Good eye! Ophelia’s plight and end heavily influenced this poem, along with several contemporary women in my life who were denied agency by the fickle forces of fate. Thank you for reading and observing this.
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This is incredibly potent and instantly reminds me of Ophelia 😊
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I too was reminded of Ophelia, so it’s good to know she was indeed one of your inspirations for this sad, dramatic story.
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