
The Smiling Lady
She crafted me a
lopsided chocolate cake
from a box with
a picture-perfect cake
and a smiling lady on it,
having just enough frosting
to scrawl HAPPY B-DAY SON
on it;
settled next to cousin’s
store-bought, soulless
gourmet masterpiece,
my “homemade” confection
stood out like a lumpy shrug,
and I was embarrassed
for it,
not for the obvious optics
and subtle jabs from relatives,
but I was undone at the seams
because deep down, I could feel
momma’s humiliation
at her best effort.
Knowing where her heart was,
and needing her to know mine,
months later, during a spring bloom,
I plucked the finest, loveliest
weeds I could find,
careful to select only the
prettiest undesirables
for the grandest dandelion bouquet
known to mankind.
I could tell
by the smile on her face
that I’d made my point.
She even went
and made another lumpy cake
with the lady smiling on the box.
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NaPoWriMo Day 20: Today’s prompt:
Today, in gratitude for making it to Day 20, our (optional) prompt asks you to write a poem about a handmade or homemade gift that you have received. It could be a friendship bracelet made for you by a grade-school classmate, an itchy sweater from your Aunt Louisa, a plateful of cinnamon toast from your grandmother, a mix-tape from an old girlfriend. And whatever gift you choose, we wish you happy writing!
Yeah, I wasn’t really into this prompt, but I did it anyway because I couldn’t think of an alternative. What more can I say? Have some lumpy cake.
Came for the poem stayed for the music. Loved them both equally. Yes, sir!
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Tears for Fears was, and is still a tremendous band. Thank you for loving my words on par with them. 🙂
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They’re awesome, you’re right about that. You’re most welcome.
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Ahh! 🙂 Lovely.
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Thanks!
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It’s definitely the thought that counts. And that you could feel both the intent and the embarrassment at her best effort was so beautiful wrought. I have always believed that weeds are just flowers growing in the wrong location. I’ve had a few dandelion bouquets and I’ve always found them beautiful.
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Thank you, Lori. 🙂
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