
Photo by Bill Fairs on Unsplash
Tethered
I ain’t much on Casanova
Languishing in purgatory on kite strings
I would love you anyway
My world, ignited by your display
Never meant to fixate on pleasure’s lite stings
I ain’t much on Casanova
Just fly your kite; I’ll soar right over
And if you demur from what pleasure might bring
I would love you anyway
Your spark within me will never decay
Though passion-bound, no fancy flights do I cling
I ain’t much on Casanova
Our kite strings are tangled, interwoven
Should you cut the line, fleeing on thermal upswing
I would love you anyway
Tethered in disheveled, joyful disarray
Memories and fantasies carry me over
I ain’t much on Casanova
But I would love you anyway
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Written for NaPoWriMo’s day 5 prompt: “write a poem that incorporates at least one of the following: (1) the villanelle form, (2) lines taken from an outside text, and/or (3) phrases that oppose each other in some way. If you can use two elements, great – and if you can do all three, wow!”
I gotta be honest, though I’m pleased with the outcome, I wasn’t a fan of this prompt. I found it a bit restrictive, like trying to box a kangaroo inside a telephone booth. (If you’re wondering why anyone would ever do that, well that’s kind of my point, isn’t it?)
I know the prompts are obviously optional, but I’m a sequential thinker and not one to bail on an artistic challenge. Well, not today, apparently, as I managed to box all three elements inside this telephone booth.
Showing my work:
“I ain’t much on Casanova” is from Casanova, by Levert.
“I would love you anyway” is from Sweet Thing, by Rufus and Chaka Kahn
You boxed the ‘roo just fine.
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Well done! I love your rhyme scheme.
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You just took me all the way back and I thank you for that alone. The poem is an added bonus, Barry.
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Very gracefully done villanelle. A difficult form to make sense out of. You worked it in fluidly.
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Well-jumped!
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