Questioning an April Shower (Elegy for Momma)
There was not a hint of sun today.
It began with the kind of rain
that made me change my shoes
a healthy April shower needed
for continuity of respiration
as trees kneed saturated soil
roots rooting for their share
new leaves are budding, color
restored to pre-bloomed florae
vivid hues contrast with a heavy sky
unending clouds spill themselves
rolling in from faded sepia photos
I wonder if you’re enjoying rain now
just as I am, about two-thousand miles
and the rain-soaked earth between us
a miracle of technology at hand
and I couldn’t retrace my soggy steps
to you even if I tried, but I hope
you have a good view of a budding oak
I hope the rain humbles blossoms’ heads
showing you proper respect,
attracting good bumble-bee company
for reproduction and continuity of
respiration, for as long as this rain
is doing more service for you,
you who can no longer feel it,
as long as it does more for us
than forcing me into dryer,
sturdier shoes, then I ask you,
how can I not be content with it?
Written for NaPoWriMo’s day 18 prompt: “write an elegy of your own, one in which the abstraction of sadness is communicated not through abstract words, but physical detail.”
I almost skipped this prompt. Not because I didn’t find the prompt interesting, but because I did, and yet I struggled mightily. I’ve lost count of the elegies I’ve written for folks I lost, but I’ve never tried to keep the scope of my loss contained within the tangible world before.
If I’m dissatisfied with my resulting poem, it’s only because I had to restrain myself from bleeding wailing abstractions everywhere. This challenged me in ways I never envisioned, and I’m glad for it.
One thought on “Day 18: Questioning an April Shower (Elegy for Momma)”
I am glad you didn’t skip the prompt. The result is beautifully crafted.